- By David B. Gosselin
Beyond the Lines: Shakespeare's Sonnets & the Secret to Immortality
William Shakespeare (baptized April 26, 1564 – died April 23, 1616) is arguably the greatest writer in any language. His poetry is not only one of the most exalted examples of what an immortal sense of creative identity can accomplish, it is a symbol of immortality and the artist—of timelessness itself.
In understanding classical poetry and classical culture today—typified by the likes of Homer, Dante, and Shakespeare—we should understood that such works were never something based “in time,” as if from a certain period. A great work of classical art was considered classical because of the timeless nature of the ideas it advanced, ideas which the poet Percy Bysshe Shelley referred to as “profound conceptions respecting man and nature.” It was classical because of the way in which it chose to represent its ideas, namely, with Beauty, Truth, and Goodness.
Every great culture that has had the opportunity to fully develop its potential has known a “classical” period. In a word: a work assumes the title of classical, of a “classic,” because of the quality of soul which emanates from it; it says something about the human condition in ways which make it stand as if outside of time and space—it is a “classic”.
In this context, while there are myriad websites listing Shakespeare’s top 10 sonnets, and no two lists are likely to be the same, we have picked ten sonnets which reveal the higher order of meaning woven through the series as a whole—the higher hypothesis subsuming each individual piece. We have selected those sonnets which best capture the depths of Shakespeare’s insight into the nature of man. We've also made this selection with an eye to revisit some of those overlooked or obscured by the more popular or academic Shakespeare readings.
Too often, many of the sonnets are weighed down by an overly romanticized or sentimental focus on the sonnets as solely isolated pieces dedicated to the infatuation with some literal subject. What happens is one fails to see that each sonnet is the shadow of the higher idea Shakespeare is trying to communicate.
We are of the opinion that no such top 10 list can be compiled, which does not take into account or recognize the higher order of meaning governing the totality of the series—just like the star which governs all the orbits of its planets and moons. In this light, we have attempted to select those 10 sonnets which best capture the idea that lies between each sonnet.
10. Sonnet #1
From fairest creatures we desire increase, That thereby beauty's rose might never die, But as the riper should by time decease, His tender heir might bear his memory: But thou contracted to thine own bright eyes, Feed'st thy light's flame with self-substantial fuel, Making a famine where abundance lies, Thy self thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel: Thou that art now the world's fresh ornament, And only herald to the gaudy spring, Within thine own bud buriest thy content, And, tender churl, mak'st waste in niggarding: Pity the world, or else this glutton be, To eat the world's due, by the grave and thee.
At first glance, Shakespeare’s idea of beauty may appear only skin deep, but right from the first two lines of his opening sonnet he states that beauty fades, and that even the fairest of creatures is no match for Time. He says that we are all attracted to beauty and long for it, “from fairest creatures we desire increase," (to reproduce), yet in recognizing that this kind of beauty fades, Shakespeare prepares us to discover an even higher order of beauty: the power to create new beauty! Herein lies the germ of Shakespeare’s entire theme as he develops it throughout the series. However, he warns us and the ostensible person he is addressing that to be preoccupied with one’s own beauty is to be blind to this qualitatively higher order of beauty, which lies in the future.
Thus, right from the beginning, we are faced with the question of our mortality and the contemplation of what comes after us. Shakespeare begins with this question because he knows that it is the only way in which we can be brought to contemplating a higher level of idea: our immortality.
9. Sonnet #130
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; Coral is far more red, than her lips red: If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. I have seen roses damasked, red and white, But no such roses see I in her cheeks; And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. I love to hear her speak, yet well I know That music hath a far more pleasing sound: I grant I never saw a goddess go, My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: And yet by heaven, I think my love as rare, As any she belied with false compare.
It was very popular to use all sorts of exaggerated comparisons to define one’s love, whether it be with the sweetness of a summer day, to the softness of the winds, with the brightness of the sun. They would use this as a literary device to give the appearance of exhausting all possibilities of loveliness, thus declaring that his love surpasses all such comparisons. By turning it on its head, Shakespeare develops a metaphor that allows us to contemplate a completely different quality of beauty, one which goes beyond simple sense perception. Shakespeare is going beyond the tendency of many of the Romantic poets who were content with titillating our senses and reveling in a thousand pretty images of the beloved. However, Shakespeare's love is located in something else.
How might this higher quality be attained?
8. Sonnet #17
The creation of beauty, as opposed to one’s obsession with one’s own beauty as some fixed thing, becomes a self-developing process—it becomes the higher hypothesis of our existence. This theme is thoroughly developed from sonnets 1-16, but now in sonnet 17 (closely related to sonnet 16), something begins to happen: a singularity emerges, or what we might call a discontinuity in mathematical terms, in regards to the hypothesis that came before:
Who will believe my verse in time to come, If it were filled with your most high deserts? Though yet heaven knows it is but as a tomb Which hides your life, and shows not half your parts. If I could write the beauty of your eyes, And in fresh numbers number all your graces, The age to come would say 'This poet lies; Such heavenly touches ne'er touched earthly faces.' So should my papers, yellowed with their age, Be scorned, like old men of less truth than tongue, And your true rights be termed a poet's rage And stretched metre of an antique song: But were some child of yours alive that time, You should live twice, in it, and in my rhyme.
Shakespeare has been elaborating his concept of beauty through poetry and now begins to allude to his conception of explicitly capturing it in his verse. However he casts doubt on whether he has the ability to keep his love's beauty alive through verse alone, and thus urges them to take fate into their own hands.
But wherefore do not you a mightier way Make war upon this bloody tyrant, Time? And fortify your self in your decay With means more blessed than my barren rhyme? Now stand you on the top of happy hours, And many maiden gardens, yet unset, With virtuous wish would bear you living flowers, Much liker than your painted counterfeit: So should the lines of life that life repair, Which this, Time's pencil, or my pupil pen, Neither in inward worth nor outward fair, Can make you live your self in eyes of men. To give away yourself, keeps yourself still, And you must live, drawn by your own sweet skill.
Despite procreation, he fears that beauty may still not survive, or that he wishes he could better protect it against Time. Thus, Shakespeare introduces a new element into the process of generating beauty, saying “But were some child of yours alive that time/You should live twice, in it, and in my rhyme.” We are now witnessing a doubly connected hypothesis, where the creation of beauty becomes twofold. He is defining another level, a higher level of cardinality, where art itself can play a role. We will come back to the sonnets following this one later in the list.
7. Sonnet 116
Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments. Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove: O, no! it is an ever-fixed mark, That looks on tempests and is never shaken; It is the star to every wandering bark, Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken. Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks Within his bending sickle's compass come; Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks, But bears it out even to the edge of doom. If this be error and upon me proved, I never writ, nor no man ever loved.
In many of the popular readings of Shakespeare, there is a tendency to get lost in some of the romantic characteristics. However beautiful and pleasing, Shakespeare’s sense of subtlety and layered meanings was usually used to allude to more than a simple romantic or pretty theme which makes happy lovers sigh. Despite that, sonnet 18 is a true emblem of the marriage vow, often being recited at weddings and used as the quintessential declaration of true love. In it, Shakespeare develops the idea of love as something that transcends time and space. Man and woman, through love, assume a kind of strength which is un-vanquishable and can in a certain way overcome all elements. Love in this sense partakes in the eternal, the one, and so through Love, we also may participate in this eternal, this one. Like Shakespeare says:
“Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks Within his bending sickle's compass come”
However, Shakespeare begins the sonnet by saying something rather peculiar for the discerning reader:
“Let me not to the marriage of true minds
The significance becomes much clearer in a proper recitation, where one is challenged to communicate the intent of the first two lines: Why would he be an impediment to the marriage of true minds? Which minds is he referring to?
Sonnet 116 is too often read without regard for what came before it, or what comes after it with the “dark lady” sonnets. While there are some who would insist that it doesn’t matter, and that one should just enjoy the sonnet alone, without having to know all the auxiliary circumstances and meanings, in this case, with the advent of some relatively new scholarship that potentially brings to light the identity of the dark lady Shakespeare was writing about, we have the possibility of accounting for the ambiguity above. It presents a case for a real biting irony.
Hildegard Hammerschmidt-Hummel, a German Shakespeare scholar, known for her exceptionally scrupulous rigor in bringing together elements of literary scholarship, iconography, forensic sciences, along with the use of botanical and medical expertise, put forward the hypothesis that this dark lady is none other than Elizabeth Vernon, the wife of Henry Wriothesley, the Earl of Southampton. Only ten weeks after they were married, Elizabeth gave birth to a girl.
Hammerschmidt-Hummel goes through some rather compelling evidence, using portraits from that time, including a famous one known as “The Persian Lady,” along with a previously lost sonnet (which she claims is the last and final sonnet in Shakespeare’s series) and inscriptions from the portrait. In terms of the all the possible people Shakespeare might have been addressing (including Shakespeare’s connection to the Earl of Southampton), she concludes that this child was most likely Shakespeare’s son. It would also explain certain intrigues around that time.
It is not our purpose to try and convince people of these findings. That being said, availing ourselves of such a hypothesis in order to situate the context of this later series and account for the irony at the beginning of sonnet 116, proves to be surprisingly useful. It becomes helpful in aiding one to imagine the possibilities and scenarios which speak to the kinds of sub-narratives Shakespeare explicitly refers to throughout the sonnet series. Moreover, it also gives meaning to the two opening lines, which we’re otherwise forced to believe are just some superfluous rhetorical device which otherwise have nothing to do with the content of the sonnet. Were the hypothesis is relatively correct, then sonnet 116 becomes a formidable example of the biting irony so characteristic of the bard.
We recommend the reader at least give the sonnet a genuine reading aloud and try to play around with the different possibilities involved in its recitation. In this light, it becomes interesting to follow this sonnet up with 117:
"Book both my wilfulness and errors down, And on just proof surmise accumulate; Bring me within the level of your frown, But shoot not at me in your wakened hate; Since my appeal says I did strive to prove The constancy and virtue of your love."
6. Sonnet #129
Here we have a denunciation of lust, its effects, in the midst of developing the theme of the “dark lady,” warning us:
The expense of spirit in a waste of shame Is lust in action: and till action, lust Is perjured, murderous, bloody, full of blame, Savage, extreme, rude, cruel, not to trust; Enjoyed no sooner but despised straight; Past reason hunted; and no sooner had, Past reason hated, as a swallowed bait, On purpose laid to make the taker mad. Mad in pursuit and in possession so; Had, having, and in quest to have extreme; A bliss in proof, and proved, a very woe; Before, a joy proposed; behind a dream. All this the world well knows; yet none knows well To shun the heaven that leads men to this hell.
Shakespeare is reflecting on the conflicting battle between one’s infatuation with a beautiful thing, the feeling of being enthralled to it, and the strong desire to “possess” it as though it were some object, some “thing” we wish to claim. It seems the woman he loved has yet chosen another course for her life, but he cannot seem to let go (whether the Elizabeth Vernon narrative be entirely accurate or not); he is conflicted with warring feelings of desire, fear, and loss. He is sharing all this with us, he is an open book. Shakespeare is warning the reader to look beyond their immediate feelings, their impulses, no matter how noble they may seem – do not be so blind as to not recognize “the heaven that leads men to Hell.”
Thus, the struggle with sense perception and of overcoming even the greatest sense of power which our unbridled feelings might have, leads us to the contemplation of mind and its role in our true happiness. Whether the narrative of Elizabeth Vernon is fully correct or not, is in this case secondary to understanding the sonnet in its context, however it does help to serve as a kind of predicate, or device by which to imagine the sort of circumstances under which this kind of series of hypotheses and conflicting emotions might have arisen. It also helps to humanize Shakespeare, and helps us to not be so vain as to imagine some great individual above all human folly and error.
In our estimation, speculating on these kinds of issues is no pedantic exercise. For, it is all the more powerful to consider the possibility that such a human being who struggled with many of the complexities of life which all our fellow human beings struggle with, was yet able to overcome himself, through his commitment to creativity, and ascend to the awesome heights of the immortal Bard. His sonnet series is the record of his journey.
See sonnets 147-150 for a full depiction of the battle between sense and mind, between the commitment to truth and love, and the deceptions of lust and ego:
“Oh me, what eyes hath Love put in my head
Which have no correspondence with true sight!”
- Sonnet 148
5. Sonnet #55
Not marble, nor the gilded monuments Of princes, shall outlive this powerful rhyme; But you shall shine more bright in these contents Than unswept stone, besmear’d with sluttish time. When wasteful war shall statues overturn, And broils root out the work of masonry, Nor Mars his sword, nor war’s quick fire shall burn The living record of your memory. ‘Gainst death, and all oblivious enmity Shall you pace forth; your praise shall still find room Even in the eyes of all posterity That wear this world out to the ending doom. So, till the judgment that yourself arise, You live in this, and dwell in lovers’ eyes.
In Sonnet 55, Shakespeare asserts the primacy of his poetic power as that force which defies the elements, that is, the immortal nature of true creativity. In the context of epic historical changes, of harrowing battles and of the crashing down of monuments; through a sweeping depiction of the vicissitudes of life, despite this, Shakespeare’s rhyme partakes of something higher, which these monuments, these stones, these princes cannot, because they lack creativity.
Of all the subjects he chooses to write about, he chooses love, and as a show of his love, his rhyme becomes the vehicle by which to immortalize it. On a higher level, this also demonstrates the power of love itself, of Agape, of selfless love, and of love for mankind, which is that force which moves one to create that which overcomes all worldly obstacles, in spite of personal loss or tragedy.
4. Sonnet #18
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate: Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, And summer's lease hath all too short a date: Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, And often is his gold complexion dimmed, And every fair from fair sometime declines, By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed: But thy eternal summer shall not fade, Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st, Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st, So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
Arguably the most famous of the Shakespeare sonnets, and definitely one of the most beautiful, Shakespeare uses the device of making a series of comparisons, which shows up in its inverted form in sonnet 130, in order to show how his Love yet surpasses any idea of comparison. In that sense, the only way to go beyond is to write that which exceeds all these notions of beauty, whereby, through his art, which captures what nothing else can, he immortalizes his love. Because of the tenderness and ideality of this particular sonnet, its use of such delicate images to convey this great sense of beauty, we are compelled to say it is truly one of the most beautiful.
3. Sonnet #59
If there be nothing new, but that which is Hath been before, how are our brains beguil'd, Which labouring for invention bear amiss The second burthen of a former child. Oh that record could with a backward look, Even of five hundred courses of the sun, Show me your image in some antique book, Since mind at first in character was done, That I might see what the old world could say To this composed wonder of your frame; Whether we are mended, or where better they, Or whether revolution be the same. Oh sure I am the wits of former days, To subjects worse have given admiring praise.
Here Shakespeare contemplates how we can know something as beautiful as his love has not already been written? Right from the beginning, he alludes to the biblical reference “there is no new thing under the sun” (Ecclesiastes 1.9), creating a sort of crisis. Is what he is attempting to do all in vain? If only there were a way that he could "prove" his love is different. Yet he concludes, as an artist, whose nature is to create, who is in a very real sense a “co-creator”: “Oh sure I am the wits of former days/To subjects worse have given admiring praise.” Shakespeare stands at the point of a new Renaissance, he stands in the shadow of the ancient Greek renaissance, and in the shadow of the Italian Golden Renaissance, whose sonetto form he has adopted and fitted to the English language. He has borrowed the sonetto form in order to communicate a new paradigm of “profound ideas concerning man and nature.” However, like many of the sonnets, they often come in pairs, like pairwise electrons or diatomic molecules, and here 59 is one which serves to set up the next one:
2. Sonnet #60
Like as the waves make towards the pebbled shore, So do our minutes hasten to their end; Each changing place with that which goes before, In sequent toil all forwards do contend. Nativity, once in the main of light, Crawls to maturity, wherewith being crown'd, Crooked eclipses 'gainst his glory fight, And Time that gave doth now his gift confound. Time doth transfix the flourish set on youth And delves the parallels in beauty's brow, Feeds on the rarities of nature's truth, And nothing stands but for his scythe to mow: And yet to times in hope, my verse shall stand Praising thy worth, despite his cruel hand.
Shakespeare here asserts the primacy of the artist, of the creative mind, and his ability to create something “new under the sun.” This becomes fundamental for recognizing Shakespeare’s acknowledgement of where he is in history, that despite 500 courses of the sun, he is creating something new. Moreover, not only is he creating something new, but he is actually redefining the directionality of clock time, where rather than fade with the passing of time, in times to come, his “verse shall stand/Praising thy worth, despite his cruel hand.” In fact, his verse will not only stand, it will increase in greatness: rather than wear his rhyme out, each 500 new courses of the sun will increase its worth, by 500 courses of the sun. Thus, Time increases its worth! This concept defines the true nature of immortality, which every individual human being may partake in.
1. Sonnet #65
Since brass, nor stone, nor earth, nor boundless sea, But sad mortality o'ersways their power, How with this rage shall beauty hold a plea, Whose action is no stronger than a flower? O! how shall summer's honey breath hold out, Against the wrackful siege of battering days, When rocks impregnable are not so stout, Nor gates of steel so strong but Time decays? O fearful meditation! where, alack, Shall Time's best jewel from Time's chest lie hid? Or what strong hand can hold his swift foot back? Or who his spoil of beauty can forbid? O! none, unless this miracle have might, That in black ink my love may still shine bright.
Here the balance of historical time, of clock time, is counterposed with the most delicate images: how can such things hold a plea, when even the greatest of monuments must yield to Time? This is the question every mortal must ask in contemplating the purpose of their lives.
In this sonnet, along with sonnet 18, one see’s how the most fragile images, those most vulnerable to the indiscriminate blows of fate and nature, have ironically, the ability to move us in the most powerful of ways, because they have the ability to invoke in us the greatest sense of humanity. In having gone through a series of hypotheses, from physical beauty, the belief in sense perceptions, the trappings of lust and the gluttony of Time; having considered the crashing down of monuments, the fortunes of princes, one’s legacy carried on by their offspring, the vicissitudes of mortality and our desires for all those things which must ultimately flee, we are yet compelled to ask: “how shall beauty hold a plea?” This becomes the most important question; by what great agency, by what saving grace, by what miracle, can Time be overcome:
"O! none, unless this miracle have might, That in black ink my love may still shine bright."
The power of Love and creativity combined, are the force which can in a very real sense move mountains, and have the power to accomplish that which seems impossible. Were Shakespeare just another skilled versifier, moved by nothing other than his wish to titillate our senses and relish in a thousand beautiful images of his beloved, his poetry would have none of the power it has today. The reason for this is simple: "Though I speak with the tongues of men and of angels, and have not charity, I am become as sounding brass, or a tinkling cymbal. (Corinthians 1:13)
Shakespeare understood this in its most profound sense.
Shakespeare’s work is not some sentimental romanticizing of his love; nor is it really a love of an individual in the strict sense of the word; just as Petrarch’s Laura and Dante’s Beatrice, they are archetypes, predicates, by which to elaborate a qualitatively higher conception of love which is truly universal i.e. Agapic. Though this love can be expressed towards another individual, the difference is Shakespeare is not coming from a place of Eros, of Philios, or Storge, of wanting to possess love or friendship, in fact he’s had to go through the process of grieving the loss of personal love and the trappings of his senses; the source of this inspiration comes from what the ancient Greeks referred to as Agape, self-less love, which came to be translated as charity in the King James version of the Bible. It comes from the power Shakespeare has to address his fellow man, demonstrating through the work of his own creative process, his working through of the paradoxes of love, loss, mortality, and the pursuit of happiness – it is the selfless act, which Shakespeare puts before his audience.
In summation, Shakespeare should not be approached as some towering immortal god who stands above us all, quite the opposite, he is our fellow mortal. The essence of Shakespeare's work, the hypothesis which underlies the higher hypothesis, is this acceptance of his mortality. It is the realization of those paradoxes which define the mortal life, our passions, and our desires to possess, whether it be people, things or love itself; it is the world that opens up as we come to the ultimate realization of having to let go of all these things.
That is Shakespeare and that is life.
If we wish to know him, we need only undertake the same journey.
 Hammerschmidt-Hummel, Hildegard. Das Geheimnis um Shakespeares 'Dark Lady': Dokumentation einer Enthüllung. Wiss. Buchges., 1999